Look as good you will not

Look as good you will not DID YOU KNOW? The Tick was created as a mascot for the newsletter of a comics shop in Boston. In my daily perusal of Wikipedia I came across STARKILLER: The Jedi Bendu Script site, which purports to. Now, hopefully its not just some well-known internet hoax that Ive been taken in by, like Bonsai Kittens. But I really cant imagine why somebody would want to fabricate really bad, fake narratives loosely based on the characters in Star Wars, so Im assuming that theyre genuine. And since, hey, this is an MIT blog, I figured that my general readership would be nerdy enough to appreciate it. Not that everybody at MIT is a Star Wars fan. I know some people who havent seen any of the films at all. According to my archives, Nicola 07 rented the entire trilogy from our dorm last year (Burton-Conner has a free rental movie collection) to brush up on the plot of the original trilogy before seeing MTGs fall production of Star Wars: Musical Edition. But, yes, Revenge of the Sith did come on during finals week and we did get into a heated debate about the and the relative power levels of various Jedi. My own position was that if Darth Sidious were really that much stronger than Mace Windu, he would not have had expended so much energy in holding him back that he turned his forehead into a butt. Jeremy 09 argued that Sidious was only pretending to be weak to lure Anakin to the dark side, but really, couldnt he have done that without turning his forehead into a butt? Anyway, when you start to look at George Lucass original scripts, you start to understand how the prequel trilogy could have turned out the way it did. The five drafts leading up to A New Hope show a vast improement in quality, suggesting that Episodes I, II, and III just could have benefitted from a little revision to remove. For example, take this original introduction to Darth Vader: Vader raises his arm and as a sudden pain grips Leia, she doubles up unable to continue. Vader raises his arm and a flask on the table mysteriously jumps into his open hand. He casually drinks from the flask. I understand that its just a device to show Vaders command of the Force, but I imagine casually drinking from a flask is one of the less threatening activities Darth Vader can engage in. But even better is this Woody Allenesque dialogue upon the introduction of Ben Kenobi. BEN: Good morning! LUKE: What do you mean, good morning? Do you mean that it is a good morning for you, or do you wish me a good morning, although it is obvious Im not having one, or do you find that mornings in general are good? BEN: All of them altogether. Maybe if that had been left in, they wouldnt have lost Best Picture to Annie Hall. But these are just from the third draft of the script, when they had the plot pretty much in place (except that it involved something about Obi-Wan searching for a Kiber crystal to amplify his Force powers). Just seven months before that, the plot involved Owen, Beru, Biggs, Windy, Luke, and Leia Starkiller all living together on the desert planet of Utapau and Luke receiving this message from his older brother Deak: DEAKS IMAGE: Whippersnapper, I didnt make itIm sorry. The forces of the Bogan have become strong and deadlyI am lost. Father is in grave danger. He needs you and he needs the KIBER CRYSTAL. You must find a way to get to Ogana Major on your own. He is waiting for you there. Be careful, though. Ogana Major is under siege by the Imperial Legions of Alderaan. You must hurry for the force of the Ashla grows weak, and I dont know how much longer father can hold out. The enemy has constructed a powerful weapon to use against him. Warn Uncle forget Obi-Wan, but they do eventually come in contact with Lukes father, The Starkiller, who uses the Force (and the Kiber crystal) to hold off evil influence just long enough for Luke to hit the famous exhaust port with his photon torpedoes. Its hard to believe that things turned out so incredibly well just two years later. But even after making A New Hope and Return of the Jedi, Lucass original conception for Return of the Jedi was not quite the Ewok extravaganza that were all used to. The climax involved Lando fighting two Death stars orbiting the imperial capital planet (actually, that would have been pretty cool), but also featured the sudden resurrection of Obi-Wan Kenobi. And how to explain this unlikely event? LUKE: Ben Slowly, the hooded figure looks up, revealing his face. It is Ben Kenobi in the flesh. BEN: I could no longer stay in the netherworld. LUKE: But Yoda said BEN: that I would become one with the Force and choose not to return to the material world? That your anger prevented me from LUKE: But Im not angry not anymore I understand why you didnt tell me about my father. I do. BEN: I know. And I am here to help you destroy the Emperor, and your father. But Vader turns out to be old and weak in his battle with Obi-Wan, so the Emperor jumps in to take care of it with his force lightning. Luckily, Luke has an ace up his sleeve The Emperor turns his back on Vader and faces the old Jedi, raising his hands in the air, which causes lightning to strike at Ben. LUKE: BEN, NO! Luke leaps in front of his mentor, and raises his hand in defense. The bolts are deflected by an invisible shield. Wherever a bolt hits, the image of Yoda momentarily appears at the point of impact. Now, granted that you cant really get everything out of a movie by reading its scripts, and some lines that might look dumb on paper, like, say, Into the garbage chute, flyboy! were brought to the life by the incomparable acting of Carrie Fisher. But, really, after reading stuff like this, its easier to see how George got ideas like Hey, Ill have R2-D2 spray out an oil slick and then set these guards on fire with his jet propulsion. or Nobody remembers that dumb old line from Return of the Jedi anyway, lets just have Padme die in childbirth. or Yoda fighting would be SO COOL! or I dont like sand is just too great of a piece of dialogue to pass up. or Ive got it! Jar Jar Binks! Pictures from Belgium later this week.